Favourite Ice-cream

My favourite ice cream is strawberry. It is yummy.
                                                           by Roland

God Strand

Our happy God made the flowers to make our world beautiful.

Describe a Picture

Learning goal: I am learning to write a descriptive text.
Success criteria: I can do this when I

• use powerful verbs
• use describing words

The sea splashed into the boat. The waves crashed into the boat.The people were scared.

                                                 by Roland

Fun Time

In the the weekend my family and I went to the playground. I went on the swing. We had fun.
                                                        by Roland

Family Time

Learning goal: I am learning to write a recount.
Success criteria : I can do this when I

• write my events in order
• use linking words

In the holidays my family and I went to the beach. we made a sandcastle. It was hot. We went back home.

                                                      by Roland

                                                      

The Lion King

I am learning to write about the part of the story that I liked the best.

The part of the story that I liked the best was when the hippo got stuck in the mud.
                                                         by Roland